diff --git a/broadcastradio/1.1/IBroadcastRadio.hal b/broadcastradio/1.1/IBroadcastRadio.hal
index 6e7002d785..dadba2accb 100644
--- a/broadcastradio/1.1/IBroadcastRadio.hal
+++ b/broadcastradio/1.1/IBroadcastRadio.hal
@@ -31,14 +31,16 @@ interface IBroadcastRadio extends @1.0::IBroadcastRadio {
      * Fetch image from radio module.
      *
      * This call is meant to make V1_0::MetaData lightweight - instead of
-     * passing image data blob in MetadataType.RAW field, only identifier is
-     * passed, so the client may cache images or even not fetch them.
+     * passing an image data blob in the MetadataType.RAW field, the HAL
+     * implementation only passes the identifier, so the client may cache images
+     * or even not fetch them.
      *
-     * Identifier may be any arbitrary number - sequential, sha256 prefix,
+     * The identifier may be any arbitrary number - sequential, sha256 prefix,
      * or any other unique value selected by the vendor.
      *
      * The data should be a valid PNG, JPEG, GIF or BMP file.
-     * Invalid format must be handled gracefully as if the image was missing.
+     * Image data with an invalid format must be handled gracefully in the same
+     * way as a missing image.
      *
      * The image identifier may become invalid after some time from passing it
      * with metadata struct (due to resource cleanup at the HAL implementation).
@@ -56,7 +58,7 @@ interface IBroadcastRadio extends @1.0::IBroadcastRadio {
      * @param id Identifier of an image;
      *           value of 0 is reserved and should be treated as invalid image.
      * @return image A binary blob with image data
-     *               or zero-length vector if identifier doesn't exists.
+     *               or a zero-length vector if identifier doesn't exist.
      */
     getImage(int32_t id) generates (vec<uint8_t> image);
 };
diff --git a/broadcastradio/1.1/IBroadcastRadioFactory.hal b/broadcastradio/1.1/IBroadcastRadioFactory.hal
index fce1cc0c72..edf78ff09a 100644
--- a/broadcastradio/1.1/IBroadcastRadioFactory.hal
+++ b/broadcastradio/1.1/IBroadcastRadioFactory.hal
@@ -19,8 +19,10 @@ package android.hardware.broadcastradio@1.1;
 import @1.0::IBroadcastRadioFactory;
 
 /**
- * To use 1.1 features you must cast specific interfaces after being returned from 1.0 HAL,
- * for example V1_1::ITuner::castFrom() after retrieving it from IBroadcastRadio::openTuner().
+ * To use 1.1 features you must cast specific interfaces returned from the
+ * 1.0 HAL. For example V1_0::IBroadcastRadio::openTuner() returns V1_0::ITuner,
+ * which can be cast with V1_1::ITuner::castFrom() call.
+ *
  * The 1.1 server must always return the 1.1 version of specific interface.
  */
 interface IBroadcastRadioFactory extends @1.0::IBroadcastRadioFactory {